Thursday, September 21, 2006

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like a niqaabi
all you see

is my
eyes

follow
your circuit

i hijab my
lust

wrap it up
so you wont

be offended

when i dream
of you.

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

this made my jaw drop!

brilliant and daring...

Anonymous said...

wow

Hasina Suliman said...

profound...
teasing...
gripping...
wordy mysteries of textified thoughts...
very nice indeed!

. said...

loves your poetry. ?????

Anonymous said...

brillilant

shuvo said...

itz like dat 19 nd itz impact on a so called prolongin luv which iz in fact cliche at da end of a desired dream comin frm da aroma of a forbidden garden... nywayz, itz a wonderful preparation nd gud enough 2 brin da thingy feelin inside.

Anonymous said...

wooah.
this hit me somewhat.
woot!
it struck a nerve saaleha!

Anonymous said...

I don't think I'll ever get tired of reading this one.

It needs to be printed and put in my offline "DEAR DIARY".